Riy0's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[PIANO - Taxa's theme ~ Harmonic Medium (AToEM)]

Square Enix needs to higher your ass.
I loved this one. <3

So far my two fave musicians on NG is you and troisynx.

Pheanir responds:

That's really nice of you to say, I'm happy you enjoy my music! ♥

[End Game]

This one wasn't that bad. The guitar did have a few issues with timing but it wasn't like your others. You really do need to work on singing. I think the problem ks that you're trying to sound like a rock singer but it makes you sound really weird...

johnnyq1233 responds:

No! I know I'm not a rock star.. These songs are recorded at the moment and off the cuff...
If i like what has gone down I'll try and work on it. But, for the most of this stuff, it is ideas and possibilities that are here.

[Shimmy Shimmy Quake]

The singing was not very good. Things you could work on, pitch, timing, and tone. Practice on that. 😌 I can admire you for playing chords on the guitar but you have no rhythm. It's completely off evey measure. To be honest and I don't really like sounding this way but you really need to work on rhythm. Use a Metronome. You can Google it and google will pop up a web based one. Sorry for the bad review but this is completely honest.

Reply:
That is OK if you don't like my stuff. This wasn't about my work but about yours. You may make up excuses, but it doesn't sound good. Sorry to say.

johnnyq1233 responds:

This is a bit of a rip on Led Zeppelin..lol
I'm not a big fan of them. The fat and loose drums and the bluesy and loose timings... well that is part of that genre.
I did check out the stuff you have put out!
Not impressed! AT ALL!

[FM 14 - Sweet Guidance]

I heard this on music station on the discord server and they linkedme to you so I can favorite. I loved the composition. Vrry beautiful.❤

Pheanir responds:

Aww, thank you, that's really kind of you. I am glad you like it ~ ♪

[AIM - sursum=corda.EXFLOW_cls.PANDAEMONIUM::STORMFALL/.]

I love when you do stuff like this. I love a large variety of music. I like musicians of culture. That's why I enjoy your stuff so much. ❤

Troisnyx responds:

I'm glad; culture is certainly something I would like to borrow a fair bit because it, along with musical tradition, kinda describes what we've achieved as humans. I feel that especially for the drums; I've never really known a culture without a drumming tradition and so any kind of drumming tends to have a pull on me.

[AIM - Timeless Adventure]

Thanks for a fave. I was curious and I stumbled upon this master piece. Sounds well done and professional. Please keep it up.

Everratic responds:

Thanks for the review :)

[Felix Zophar and Lot7even - Fallout (ft. Troisnyx)]

You sound badass af Troisnyx. Mixing was amazing. Didn't hear anything cloudy. Music sounds up to radio standards. Y'all should collab more. Kudos to all musicians. ❤

FelixZophar responds:

This song was actually just denied by trap nation. :(

[Estavius ~ Vocal Ver.]

Sounds like something I would write. Koodles to the composer.
Your voice sounded really good in this.

Troisnyx responds:

Kudos @Phyrnna <3333

Thank you, glad you enjoyed the vocal work!

[At the Ends of the Earth]

Thought I see what you were up to nowadays. I find this to sound great in a war movie. You know when an important warrior dies and everyone is around a fire mourning over the loss of a hero.

Troisnyx responds:

Now that you mention it, I can see it taking that tone o.o I'd not actually thought of that before.

It is mournful, though I hope that like today, there's the resurgence after every fall, the resurrection after every death, the light after every darkness -- it is written with my own personal darkness in mind, after all. Thanks for stopping by and listening! ^_^

[Dubstep Dash]

Actually very good for a beginner.
You are now scouted, by the way. KEEP it like this. USE what you know already. Learn a genre one at the time before jumping genre to genre so you know of techniques, etc. (That's my advice)

There are parts missing in your track. It felt kind of empty. Keep learning!
I don't know how to make dubstep, so I can't help much. All I know, it's not a hit dubstep song yet. It needs more to the sound than you have now!

KEEP IT UP. <3

DiscardGD responds:

Thank you so much. I will try my best to keep on improving. Now I've been scouted I see that I do have a bit of potential to make some good audio so I will keep trying.

I will take your suggestions into consideration - thanks for the advice. :D