Great piano, great hihats. Though, the kick I can't hear very well. That's the only flaw. I am glad to see you improve on your compositions kills! :)
What's the singer's vocal range, btw? Do you know?
Sorry, missed this - erm not sure on the range - not the widest.
I love seeing improvement on your composition skills!
See, it gets a lot easier to make good melodies once you've start getting used to a piano roll. :))
---If you wanna learn about melodic notes, which can pop out melodies even more and make people go "OH MY GOD!" message me because those are always great things to use in melodies and should be used! :)
An example of a melodic melody is YOHIO-Without Wings an orchestra piece using a Japanese composition system.
Good, but this is illegal to put on since you've used copyrighted materials (the vocals).
except for the fact that it was a released studio acappela.
The synth at 1:03 is way too heavy, and it takes out the bass completely.
But overall, it's pretty.
It was meant to be like that, i loved that effect, so it's ok if you didn't like it, because i loved it xD
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