It's OK. The hithats have way too much highend and it is hurting my ears. Also, don't advertise your tunes on audio forums where it is not welcomed. Either go to posts that ask, or make your own thread where you post your own stuff.
Update In Response: Oh, yeah, NGADM is closed for the year. Round 1 starts on the 19th. Always next year
Boiiiii I thought I was entering the deathmatch?!?!?!?!!?! Fuck it!!
Update In Response To Your Response:
Ahhhhhh I didn’t peep that. Thanks for clearing that up and I’m sorry your ears hurt. Take care!
Wb, this is great. <3
Thanks! =)
I'm glad you like it ~ ♪
The composition is really good. But...no 8bit drums?
On the 8th measurement where it had that chord to resolve the melody, you could have put an 8bit drum roll, and transition with a 8bit kick and snare beat, and so much more.
yeah, I kinda got so excited to finish I forgot a lot of important things that need to go into a song in order to make it work, but I won't do that this year
Pretty jrpg. I think the gain staging could use work to pop out the necessary components more. Like a louder snare and a kick would really help the mix. It sounds burried in it unfortunately.
Yea, I ve heard a lot about the lack of bass. My bad XD. However, its the first time i hear about "gain staging". Im going to search what it is. Thanks for the feedback!
It's pretty good. I would really have enjoyed a more strong kick.
Thanks! I know the mixing is terrible. As a matter of fact, it's so bad it's clipping at 7 dB and I'm not proud of it, but I don't want to rework this entire mess again :I
Keep going. Try not being repetitive and make it clearer for the audience.
I see what you're talking about. The beginning repeats through most of the song
Pretty good. Vocals were great.
Thank you very much! Thanks for listening.
This isnt bad. I would put this more as a hip-hop song when picking a genre. Dance is a subgenre of techno. Ex: Everytime We touch by Cascade.
I am not perfect but I am good at picking out mistakes as I am deaf to my own and not others.
What I disliked:
Kick was too loud. Make it loud enough so people can choose how hard it hits on their own systems.
There's a lack in variety.
What I like:
Hot beat
Structure
Good sound
Authenticity to trap music.
It may not be perfect but it's very good.
Cheers! Thanks a lot for your opinion, will note for sure.
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